Video/Review: Abduct Me With Your Love by xbitterangelx

The Story: Abduct Me With Your Love
The Author/Vid Maker: xbitterangelx (ffn) forevertwilightxx (youtube)
The Rating: M
The Status: WIP (only 2 chapters)

The Summary:
Bella Swan is abducted from her family and will only be returned for a price - in midst of being locked up, she meets one of her kidnappers and becomes irrevocably drawn to the green eyed man. Does he share the same feelings? AH. Rated M for lemons.

The Review:
This video is absolutely amazing. It immediately made me want to read the story and isn’t that what all trailers should do? Do you see that smirk at 0:25? It’s an evil smirk. That smirk gave me chills and had me applauding forevertwilightxx for her amazing skills. That’s right Edward is the bad guy in this one. Who doesn’t like a good bad guy?


"I wasn't going to…tell anyone." She began and Edward just huffed at her. Bella wanted to move closer to where he was kneeling, picking up the shattered glass, but the ankle cuff quickly trashed the idea. "I know you're smart. You think if I see your face you'll be the first person to land in prison." She muttered, and the green eyed man stilled, his eyes flickering from the plate and then to her. "If it were any of the others then you must believe I would have them sketched out and scanned for…" She gulped as her hand went across the stone floor, where she could see his hand only inches away due to the small lamp in the corner shining against their skin. Bella touched his skin, and a small spark of electricity flowed between them – both felt it. "You're different… And I don't know why."

"How can you trust me?" Green eyes whispered in a cracked tone, his body falling so he was sitting instead of kneeling. "I took everything from you, everything!" He growled, his head going into his hands. He was disgusted with himself – disgusted that he had pitched the idea in the first place. Matter was no object to him – he barely cared for it. It was Aro who wanted the money – green eyes wanted nothing from it. He just wanted Isabella safe.

Her sharp intake of breath connected him back to reality and he looked up to her. She was as close as she could get without the cuff breaking her off, though even then she was still too far away. "You can give it all back." She whispered so softly that he barely heard it – but he knew exactly what she said.

Could he really give it all back to her?


The story only has two chapters at the moment but I definitely think it’s got potential and deserves to be checked out. So join me in reading this new fic and don’t forget to leave some love!